I was a pupil at Rāwhiti School and this blog is where I shared my learning. This blog has been archived, no further content will be uploaded or added. You are welcome to continue viewing posts, however commenting has been disabled.
Thursday, August 9, 2018
My Favourite Place Hi my name is Sophie and I am going to be telling you about my favourite place so you better listen very carefully. When I sit underneath the tree my hands feel moist from the fresh wet grass what has just been cut.As I turn a page of my book I hear the tweating of the birds.But I have not even said the best thing of it all is the leafs falling onto me and rusling as they fall off the tree. I went to lean back on the tree I fell the hard bark crunching on my back as the bark starts crumbling on the ground. In the morning and after school it is quite but in break everyone is shouting. When it not break time all what you can here is the bird tweeting and leafs rusling as I turn a page of my book.when I lean onto the mossy ruff tree I fell the ruffness scraping my back.At break it’s my favourite place to play so that all what I can tell you about it thank you so much. By Sophie.A
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