10 ways manners help the world go better

Having manners is something you will need in every day life. The world needs manners for making a more polite and respectful place to live you will always want manners.

When you use manners the people all around you will feel happy and grateful to have you around  when they see you that will make there day brighter and make them happier.

1- Manners is essential thing because if you are talking to someone and just say hello then they feel liked and acknowledged and someone actually cares about them. If I walked up to you and said Hi , hello or how are you today you would already feel better about yourself.

2-When you are cleaning up your mess you are showing other people that you aren't wanting or needing them to did it for you and when they leave a mess just tell them if they don't listen then they are just being rude and selfish but make sure you be that nice person that picks up the mess after and not to make a fuss over it.

3-When I walk into a room I make sure my voice isn't way up at its max. By doing that your not getting into others personal space or they're conversations. When you're doing that your being respectful with your voice.

4-When you compliment people how do you feel. Great wonderful and kind. You are lifting peoples moods and making them feel great about themselves. If you do this every day your making the world a safer better place from all the complements people are getting.

5- Be honest, when you are honest to people they can feel hurt but at least they know you are telling the truth and people can have a wonderful reaction also.

6-Try to see the funny side of things it helps everyone everyone realise that people cant always do things right and mistakes happen. When you laugh don’t laugh at laugh with it will britain the mood and make everything seem lighter and happier. Try not to be the person who is always dead seir

7-be on time don’t make everyone wait for cause you’re doing the wrong thing or mucking around. When you get ready in the mornings if it takes you longer to get ready maybe start to wake yourself up earlier. Make more of an effort to get there on time by leaving the house earlier or getting your stuff without mucking around and talking little thing will make a huge difference in the time you have. 

8-Only say kind things to people cause they then will be kind back. When you swear you are putting everything and everyone around you in a bad sad mood and if people say stuff what really hurts you. When your out somewhere be respectful on the door for others and hold or take things for people if they cant carry it cause they have to much to carry.

9-Accept your own mistakes , take them as a part of learning and growing to be a new person. When your out and you accidentally do the wrong thing you just say I’m sorry oor I din’t mean to do that easy little things help.

10- When you are texting people don’t text in an aggressive way be kind and text with respect. 

Thanks for reading and please take this in and respect others.

Its wrong to fight

Persuasive writing

I think violence is bad because you can harm people and make them mentally ill and scared. Like in one in every three people has been abused and is mentally hurt.

When this is happening half of the time they cant do anything about it cause they are to scared or have been threatened not to tell anyone.


How do you feel about your self when you are getting attacked bulled and hurt?

Its not a good feeling is it and its not a good idea either to express your feelings onto other people in a hurtful way.

For example when you are hurting someone you will feel like no one is on your side for some weird reason but the reason is that no one wants to be friends with you cause of the way you treat other people and when you treat other people in a rude and unkind way it will usually come back on you some day cause people will just get sick of it.


If you are getting abused or attacked then you will usually feel worse about yourself and will feel worse about yourself and put motions on your friends or your family.

Did you know that four in every ten people have committed suiced cause they don't have any confidence in them selfs and cause they feel terrible about them self.

So it isn't ok to hurt people or attack them cause I don't think you would want that to happen to you.

Tangram builder

 Last week we at the end of math went onto a Tangram website and the first thing we got told was to Rotate-Flip-Slide.  When we did this they weren't all easy some were quick one minute ones and some took quite a bit of time to figure out. For you to go play on this website click on this link below https://mathigon.org/tangram 

On this shape here I had to play around with the angles with the shapes to see if it would go parallel , vertical and horizontal.  

Writing review

In class we have been looking at the ways detectors write and tell a story and the way they present them.The ways they present the movie or story is by using actions, environment , costumes and the appearance of the character.Last week for writing we wrote a peace of writing or a script, I worked with Azania and Bluebell. For our work this week we had to partner up and highlight the sections of each others work into the category we thought the peaces fitted the most. I found that I have to work on adding more appearance into my work so you can tell what my character looks like. 

Our main character is Cassie.

Environment - green

Actions - red

Appearance - yellow

Words - blue

INT. 1992 - A psych ward in New York, ‘Cop’ is leaning against the wall next to ‘Ward Owner’ the setting is dim and dark, - late afternoon

Cop is wearing the typical cop uniform, the camera is looking up at him, he is frowning.

Ward owner is wearing a long silk robe, she has her hair down and it's dead straight. The camera is looking down at her, she is straight faced. 

Cop (Skeptical)

“Is it safe? Is she properly contained in there?”

‘Cop’ gestures to the door

Ward Owner (Smirking)

“Fully held back and defenceless.”

‘Cop’ smiles

‘Cop’ stands up from the wall and gently pushes against the solitary confinement room

Camera focuses on ‘Cassie’ she is hunched over in a corner with her hands behind her back, crying.

Cassie is wearing a white long gown, her hair is in rough plaits, the camera looks directly at her.

Cassie (Sniffling)

“Please don’t shoot me…”

‘Ward Owner’ laughs.

Cop (Cunning)

“What is your name?”

Cassie gets legitimately confused

‘Cassie’ (Confused)

“Why would you need my name sir? Surely you have police files’’

‘Cop’ is confused, wondering how she can stay so calm and witty during this time, she has been in a psych ward, a place for crazy people, for over 6 months.

Ward owner (Pissed)

“Bloody hell, cut the crap and answer the question”

‘Cassie’ stands up

Cassie

“My name.”

Cassie takes a deep breath and observes her surroundings, but she is sure of what she wants to do. 

Cassie

“Is Cassie Evans Green. And I would like you to leave.”

‘Cassie’ draws a knife from her back pocket and throws it with incredible force and the cops hat, aimed perfectly.

The knife pierces ‘Cop’s hat and gets pinned against the wall

‘Ward owner’ flinches.

‘Cop’ is stunned but won’t say it. He tries to remain calm.

Cassie stands defiantly, she wants to grin at them but decides against it, so she stands expressionless, but stands strong. 

Cop

“Clearly not so defenceless.”

Ward Owner

“I have no idea how she got that-”

‘Cop’ looks over at his hat pinned on the wall

‘Cop’ pulls out handcuffs and walks towards her.

Cop

“Okay, listen here, you are going to answer some questions, answer any of them wrong and these handcuffs will wriggle their way around your wrists. Got it?”

‘Cassie’ nods

Cop

“How long have you been here?”

  

Cassie (Numb)

“6 months”

‘Cop’ nods

Cop

“How are you acquainted with Miles Hargreen?”

Cassie

“He came in a few times and talked with me, taught me, told me I special. Don't really remember him much.” 

‘Ward Owner’ nods at ‘Cop’

Cop (Continuing)

“And, did you know that he… Passed away?”

Cassie (Getting number)

“Yes. I was informed 3 days ago about his passing. I heard from a friend… and before you ask that friend is one of the friends I have here.”

Cop

“Do you know why I am here?”

Cassie starts to piece everything together. 

Cassie 

“You are convicting me of the murder of Miles Hargreen.”

‘Cop’ simply nods.

Cassie holds out her arms, she has an idea to trick them. 

Cassie 

“Put them on then.”

Cop (Stunned)

“So you did it? You murdered him?”

‘Cassie’ lowers arms. Triumphant that her plan has worked its magic

Cassie (Pleased)

“There you go officer, you are not sure I did the crime. So please if you are not 100% sure then leave, and come back another time if you discover that it was me.”

‘Ward owner’ charges at her, enraged that his least favourite patient is not leaving the place he calls home. She is disturbing her peace.

Ward Owner (Mad)

“It is not your call to decide matters like these!”

Cassie (Challenging)

“Why, because I am crazy, or because I am a woman-”

‘Cop’ is fuming.

Cop (cuts her off)

“Cassie Evans Green you are under arrest for the murder of Miles Hargreen, anything you can can and will-

Cassie (interrupting)

“Be used against you.”

‘Cassie’ snaps the straps of the handcuffs using her knee and springs for the window.  

She lands. Breathing heavily as she pulls a smoke tube from her other pocket. She takes this time to thank her friend for smuggling in these supplies. 

‘Cassie’ lights a smoke tube.

Smoke fills the room

‘Cop’ draws his gun and starts firing and a silhouette drops to the floor

‘Cop’ believes it was Cassie he shot and leaves the room. Forgetting ‘ward owner’ 

Pan down to the floor to see ‘ward owner’ dead on the floor.

Pan up slowly to see ‘Cassie’ standing on the windowsill, smoke tube in hand biting her lip. 

‘Cassie jumps down from the window and the camera follows her as she runs.