Listening
With a microphone plugged into the earth
We can hear pounding foot steeps,
of the ants climbing up through the dirt.
We can hear people climbing, swimming with power,
Taking a breath, through the wild class.
When we take our earphones off we can hear
Earths huge silence listening back.
Nice poem Sophie. You have some great verbs in here which gives your poem action and colour. Your words created some pretty cool pictures in my mind, so well done.
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Wow, Sophie! This poem is so good. You have really good verbs which really make your poem really stand out. Maybe next time you could talk about what this poem was for?
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