Persuasive writing
I think violence is bad because you can harm people and make them mentally ill and scared. Like in one in every three people has been abused and is mentally hurt.
When this is happening half of the time they cant do anything about it cause they are to scared or have been threatened not to tell anyone.
How do you feel about your self when you are getting attacked bulled and hurt?
Its not a good feeling is it and its not a good idea either to express your feelings onto other people in a hurtful way.
For example when you are hurting someone you will feel like no one is on your side for some weird reason but the reason is that no one wants to be friends with you cause of the way you treat other people and when you treat other people in a rude and unkind way it will usually come back on you some day cause people will just get sick of it.
If you are getting abused or attacked then you will usually feel worse about yourself and will feel worse about yourself and put motions on your friends or your family.
Did you know that four in every ten people have committed suiced cause they don't have any confidence in them selfs and cause they feel terrible about them self.
So it isn't ok to hurt people or attack them cause I don't think you would want that to happen to you.
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