Visual Prompts
This week in literacy we wrote visual prompts this was my favorite it is called .
Dad
Like always dad is working I don't even really think I can call him my dad he never talks to me never gives me a hug and is never there when I really need him. It is like i'm a ghost to him and the worst thing out of it all is that he wont even acknowledge me when its my birthday. Its the 9th of June and a day after my birthday and I was crying myself to sleep again only because of one little thing he wont fly my bright red kite with me.
Hi Sophie,
ReplyDeleteyou have written a great story. Next time make sure you check you grammar. Well done,
Isla